Streaming and mobile devices have forever altered how we create, deliver, and view narrative content. As screenwriters, we have to adapt to this new environment without losing sight of a compelling story and engaging characters.

That’s where I come in.

With more than three decades of professional screenwriting experience, I offer script critiques, coaching, and classes that can help you navigate this new media landscape.

I’m excited to be offering another round of my advanced screenwriting class! I call it “8 x 8” because enrollment is limited to 8 writers and it will run for 8 consecutive weeks.

8 x 8: Advanced Screenwriting

WHEN: Mondays, 6 – 8:30 pm, October 18 – December 6
COST: $500

Please contact me to sign up and arrange payment.

In this class you’ll get in-depth instruction on something I feel very passionate about – closing the gap between the screenplay and the finished film.

As screenwriters you will learn to employ the skills of other filmmaking disciplines in order to bring more immediacy to your pages. You’ll write like a director directs, a DP shoots, a production designer designs, an editor edits. The goal is to create a more complete cinematic experience so that when readers finish your script they will feel they have not read a screenplay but have “seen” the movie or series.

Visually-driven. Immersive. Visceral. These are terms you will hear a lot – along with my continued proselytizing about character revelation, the power of POV, and sequences.

Other topics include individual scene construction; subtext and exposition in dialogue; choreographing action, and using effectively sound and music. Pitching and pitch decks (the new treatments) will also be covered.

And, of course, you’ll also get my notes and feedback on your work (up to 10 pages) each week.

This is not a beginning screenwriting class. You will get the most out of it if you come already armed with a script idea you’re ready to write or planning to rewrite an existing draft.

Sign-up is on a first-come, first-served basis. Should the class fill, I will keep a waiting list in case of a cancellation.

Please give a shout if you have any questions:


Yes, I can read and critique your script. My feedback includes notes and a follow-up discussion on Skype, Zoom, or phone.

Feature-length –
(90-120 pages or more)
1-Hour Series Pilot –
(@60 pages)
Half-hour Series Pilot –
(@30 pages)
Short –
(add $2 per page over 15)


Writing a screenplay is hard. Finishing one is even harder.

As a veteran screenwriter, I know what it takes to get a script done, and I can help you do the same.

In my coaching sessions on Skype or Zoom, we can design a roadmap with milestones within a workable time frame that will keep you accountable and focused so that steady progress is made toward your destination – a finished script.

Sessions can also be devoted to specific creative topics such as character, plot, structure, and writing more visually, and issues like procrastination, blocks, fear, and increasing productivity.

Coaching sessions – per hour $60

The Writer-Actor Workshop

“This ain’t no Zoom class! This ain’t no table-read! This ain’t no foolin’ around!”

WHAT: A creative workshop bringing writers and actors together to test-drive original material
WHEN: Coming again in 2022!
WHERE: Rooney/Totman Studio, 305 SE 3rd Ave, 4th Floor, Portland, 97214
CO-INSTRUCTORS: Screenwriter Randall Jahnson and actor Ted Rooney
COST: $325

Tired of mouthing your own dialogue to yourself? Going crazy with all those voices in your head? Wonder what it’s like to have talented actors embody the characters you’re creating?

Then this class is for you!

In this studio setting, you collaborate with actors to stage selected scenes from your finished screenplay or work-in-progress.

Whether you want to direct your own script, learn how to communicate with actors, or inject your screenplay with fresh energy before submitting it to competitions, this class is an excellent opportunity to get your work off the page and into the hands and mouths of talented performers who can bring it to life. Not only hear your dialogue, see it performed; discover what works and what doesn’t; receive on-the-spot feedback from both instructors and your colleagues; make real-time adjustments; and run it again.

Each week half the class will present their scenes while the other half observes and offers input. The off-week writers will also receive notes from me about their scenes, which must be submitted the week before they are staged.

Instruction will also be given on how to diagram a scene – breaking it down into “beats” and identifying character objectives and actions. This can also sharpen the focus of a scene as well as create pathways for deeper understanding, exploration, and experimentation.

And it’s fun. That’s right, folks, we strive to keep the “play” in “screenplay.”

All scenes will be filmed.

This is not a beginning screenwriting course. If you have not taken a class from me before and I am unfamiliar with your work, please contact me immediately so I can discuss your work.

Also, out of consideration for your classmates, we ask that you be fully vaccinated for COVID.

Questions? Details? Give me a shout at

Randall Jahnson screenwriting class